Overall a very solid piece. Great b-roll shots although I did notice one shot of the lemons in which the camera got bumped. Try not to use shots like that. Other than that though, you got some great shots. I'm stoked you got an interview with a customer. You really needed that and I'm glad you went the extra distance to get that at the last minute like that. Interviews were shot well. However Lydia's interview is off to the side too much. She's looking off camera more than she should. Evan's VO was just ok. I'm not convinced that he's fully into the story. He needs to develop that on camera voice and that comes with practice, practice, and more practice. It also sounds like there's a slight echo to it. That VO needs to be super clean because he's narrating the story throughout. I like you ending with the comment about the employees being treated like family. However you show me shots of a rating they received instead. Let's see the employees and the boss interacting or smiling as they work instead. 3 points.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.