The Good: Interview audio is excellent. All of your interviews have great sound. Some b-roll shots are excellent but more of them need more work.
The Not So Good: Some are really dark and your autofocus of the camera goes in and out sometimes. Some interviews are very well done. Others are too dark or not in focus.
Audio from opening shot is too hot and peaking. Gerald Hirata is the Chairman of what? Audio isn't leveled throughout. Carol's interview is spot on and done very well. Clear and in focus with the blurred background and great audio. Itsue's is dark and needs a light. The Reverend's interview is framed well and has good audio but the background isn't blurred. Susan's is not in focus and has a not so pleasing background. Maile's is too dark and the colors are off. Some of your b-roll moves around and isn't steady. Be careful in using transitions. You have some that fade in and out and they don't work very well here. Voiceovers are sometimes hard to understand. Audio fades out during interviews which also shouldn't happen. The part about the ethnicities doesn't match the VO. The clips after that specific VO don't support it.
Overall it's an inconsistent piece. Some things are done very well, and others need some work. It's not done poorly as there are a lot of things to be proud of, especially your audio, but I wish it was more consistent throughout.
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