A script will explain exactly what will be heard in your video. You should leave out the spelling of his name because that's just for you to use to create a lower third graphic for your video. You have some good questions but what's missing is some narration. You need voice overs to explain the story about Ty. In looking at your script it's hard to determine what the beginning, middle, and ending is other than seeing where it comes in the script. What is Ty's story? A personal profile needs to be more than just him answering questions. I don't think I was very clear in my instructions as to what the finished product will look like so I won't knock it down much for the story.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.