You have some extra audio in there that shouldn't be there if you listen to it closely. The idea itself is good as we all can use some help with procrastination. I like the different shots you used to show the dates going by on the calendar. I think it does need maybe some music in the background as hearing nothing is a little unnerving. There's not much NAT sound in someone crossing off a date in the calendar. Maybe if he said something as he was crossing the dates off? Like, "Our project is due in two weeks." Then, "Man, time is flying by," etc. There's also a jump cut at the door shots. I can kinda get your message but I need to do a lot of thinking. There needs to be something else that helps me with what's happening here. Maybe a VO as it goes on? I don't really get how procrastination takes over you in this PSA. I see nothing but dates being crossed off the calendar. Maybe shots of showing him doing other things instead?
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